What you think of this song I wrote?

She looked at me / for the first time / she said she saw stars /we went down / to the club /and sat and talked /while we listened to some tom petty / I said I / had some interes t /she smiled back /next thing i knew / it was love (background vocals-it was love )/time went by i knew /that somethign was wrong /she was acting weirde r/ seemed disinterested / then i looked in the mirror and saw the truth(background vocas)saw the truth / (chorus) the truth came out/set itself free / i knew she was moving on /didnt want ehr gone / but it had to be / couldnt keep her at bay / had to let her go(end chourus) so she lef t/ went cross country to find herself /i picked up my guita r/thought of playing /but all that went throgh /my head / was heartache /i rememebred what she said/ "please forget about me" /but how could i? /it was true love/ (chorus) the truth came out /set itself free / i knew she was moving on/didnt want ehr gone/ but it had to be/ couldnt keep her at bay/ had to let her go(end chourus) yeras have gone by/since i last seen her/ i think about her now and then/ wonder how she is/ hope shes well/ but i have moved on/ dont look back is what i say!/ keep the wheels a moving/ tommorow is a new day/yes yes/keep it moving/and when you look in that mirror/ youll see what i mean/ (chorus) the truth came out/set itself free/ i knew she was moving on/didnt want ehr gone/ but it had to be/ couldnt keep her at bay/ had to let her go(end chourus) so she left/ went cross country to find herself/i picked up my guitar/thought of playing/but all that went throgh/my head/ was heartache/i rememebred what she said/ "please forget about me"/but how could i?/it was true love/ (chorus) the truth came out/set itself free/ i knew she was moving on/didnt want ehr gone/ but it had to be/ couldnt keep her at bay/ had to let her go(end chourus)